I only received one comment of feedback on the last elevator speech but it was very helpful. They pointed out that I am a victim of the "uhs" and "ums" and I think we all are at some point in our lives. I took this pretty seriously given it was our last one and really wanted to fix that. So for my final pitch I focused on being confident. I did not want to stumble over my words or use fillers like uh and um. I wanted to be as confident as possible so I dressed up to get into the real pith mindset. I spoke with an "umph" and made sure to be as clear and cool as I could. I even worked on my posture. In the last couple of videos I worked on being relational but this time I worked on my appearance. I had my shoulders back and projected my pitch to the consumers with force that could only be met with respect, even if the consumer did not need m product I wanted them to at least think that they needed a partner like me.
Hey Mitchell, I think you dd a great job correcting your errors from the comments that were on your last pitch. You're pitch was very clear, you were confident in your product idea and your goal. You did a great job!
Hi Mitchel! You did very well explaining your service! It was very detailed, and it seemed very trustworthy. I really liked how you made sure to involve the people as much as possible to show them that the money is not only involved with them but also with the people. You also seemed very confident in everything you were saying. Good job!
Hey Mitchell,
ReplyDeleteI think you dd a great job correcting your errors from the comments that were on your last pitch. You're pitch was very clear, you were confident in your product idea and your goal. You did a great job!
Hi Mitchel!
ReplyDeleteYou did very well explaining your service! It was very detailed, and it seemed very trustworthy. I really liked how you made sure to involve the people as much as possible to show them that the money is not only involved with them but also with the people. You also seemed very confident in everything you were saying. Good job!